Due to the incident in Christchurch that has happened on 15th of March, we had to make a poem about how we feel about the incident. Our teachers told us that we didn't have to do a rhyming one so, here is my poem Hope you enjoy.
I love the honesty in your poem Jacque, you have highlighted the main points and have added your thoughts, feelings and opinions too. I agree that there is too much hate and we need to accept others and show kindness always. Even a little smile goes a long way.
hello jacque my name is Florence. i really like your poem i think that it was really heart touching and fanatic it is very beautiful and i agree that it was a tragic event that took place in Christchurch.It is nice to see that you have thought about the people that have been it this tragic. I have really enjoyed reading your poem: have a nice day:)
I love the honesty in your poem Jacque, you have highlighted the main points and have added your thoughts, feelings and opinions too. I agree that there is too much hate and we need to accept others and show kindness always. Even a little smile goes a long way.
ReplyDeletehello jacque my name is Florence. i really like your poem i think that it was really heart touching and fanatic it is very beautiful and i agree that it was a tragic event that took place in Christchurch.It is nice to see that you have thought about the people that have been it this tragic. I have really enjoyed reading your poem: have a nice day:)
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