The Black Cat
As you stare into these eyes of a Black Cat, your probably wondering hat his name is, well...his name is The Black Cat, very basic name. The Black Cat is a famous cat in the town called Cat Island. He is Famous for wining the most Blackest Cat in the world. He has won 14 years in a row. He takes after his dad. His mum and were killed when Animal War I came between the Dogs and Cats. They were both ripped up by two giant pit bulls, and Black Cat was only 4 years old. Ever since then he has been waiting for Animal War II to come so that he can destroy the two veracious pit bulls that ripped his parents to pieces. During his 14 years of wining the Most Blackest Cat Comp, Black Cat has been training for the next Animal War II, he has been doing 20 Cat push ups a day, he has been learning how to shoot cat balls at a target and he has been working on his Camouflage skills. Camouflaging for him is very all he has to do is go by a black area and close his eyes. One Sunny Day the Whole Cat Island was warn that the Dogs maybe coming that day to attack the cats, so when Black Cat woke up the next morning he quickly got all his gears and went will the Traditional Cat Army(TCA). 20 minutes later the Traditional Dog Army (TDA) came flying by on their planes and started shooting at the cats. Black cat was just waiting for the two biggest pit bulls to jump out of the plane, once they did Black cat just got out his Fur Ball gun and started shooting at the two pit bulls. By the time he shot the 4 bullet the two pit bulls were already dead. "That was for my parents" He said. After killing the two pit bulls Black Cat went home and relaxed, he was just glad that he killed the two pit bulls that took his parents away. Now Black Cat is cheerful as he could be, and lived happily ever after...
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What a very interesting concept for a story. I don't think I would appreciate being around during Animal War 1 or 2! Maybe next time try to add a little more descriptive language to your writing. Some similes or metaphors, or adjectives to describe the setting and characters more.
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