Pobble 365 20 minute writing

The picture you see here is a picture of little light balls, which are homes, and whats happening is all the homes are celebrating New Years. In the little town called Never-land there is a tradition where everyone is up waiting for 12 to celebrate New Year Eve, but there is a little twist, well everyone comes out side and starts dancing and hugging and stuff. As you see, there is a man that is leaving town. He is leaving town because he goes to a little hut where he stores these sacred stuff that no one else knows about. Well this mans name is John. John here is going to the hut and the sacred stuff that is there is called Lumian. Lumian is little triangles and if you wet them then form some sort of spiritual animal. John was going to get one triangle so that he can get one animals for New Years. Well he was getting this special animal for New Years. The animal that he wanted to get was the Blue dragon. He wanted to get the Blue Dragon cause he was thinking about Chinese New Year. so he thought that he would bring this dragon and celebrate New Years, keeping in mind that he has to sneak out without anyone knowing about it. He goes through all the Lumian's and finds Blue Dragon and quickly tries to get back home before it turns to 12am. At 11:58 he gets back and has to open the Lumian to let the Blue dragon out for everyone. 12am everyone is dancing and sees the Blue dragon flying around. Everyone is cheering and laughing.

I chose this piece of writing because I wanted to change up my topics since I was just explaining my weekends. What I found easy was just coming up the story along the way as I was writing. However the thing I found hard was trying to start it off and just take it from there, and also trying to keep the ideas in sync with each other. My next steps are to use more powerful vocabulary and language because I feel like it was just a little ehhh with just everyday vocabulary.

My Saturday!!

This little writing is my 20 mins writing. This is where we have 20 mins to write anything we want onto our blog to everyone that goes on your blog. On Saturday the 3rd of November I was heeling from being sick for about 3 or 4 days and well my dad decided to take me to the beach with my family because I haven't been out since Thursday (2 days) and well my Dad wanted be to get fresh air and not stay in the house for 3 days straight. So my dad, Nan, my cousin Maria, my cousin Daniel and I went to Tapeka Beach with my other uncles, aunties and cousins. When we got to the fairy all of the kids got out to look at the water. Once we got off the fairy we could finally see some others beaches and some oyster farms. Before we went to Tapeka we had to stop at the Garage to get some bait for all the men to go fishing. Once we arrived at Tapeka all my aunties and Uncles had put all the snacks out for us and we also had a little cooking some meat for us. After everything was set up my uncles and my dad and I put up the tent and also filled a hair couch for us to sit on. After everything was set all the kids went for a swim and all the men went for a fish, but me and my cousin Noah couldn't swim cause we were both sick. When my dad and uncles came back they also brought back some Kina's and my whole family ate them all before we could even save some to take home. As it came to about 3'ish then all the kids umped out cause they got cold and me and all y older cousins were playing around in the air couches that we filled up and it was super fun cause we all squashing each other. As it came to the ending of the day it started to get windy so we went back on the fairy back to my uncles house to have a feed, After the lovely I went home had a nice warm shower and went to bed. So that was my fun family Saturday this week.

WALT: Use different types writings to make them easier for us.