The picture you see here is a picture of little light balls, which are homes, and whats happening is all the homes are celebrating New Years. In the little town called Never-land there is a tradition where everyone is up waiting for 12 to celebrate New Year Eve, but there is a little twist, well everyone comes out side and starts dancing and hugging and stuff. As you see, there is a man that is leaving town. He is leaving town because he goes to a little hut where he stores these sacred stuff that no one else knows about. Well this mans name is John. John here is going to the hut and the sacred stuff that is there is called Lumian. Lumian is little triangles and if you wet them then form some sort of spiritual animal. John was going to get one triangle so that he can get one animals for New Years. Well he was getting this special animal for New Years. The animal that he wanted to get was the Blue dragon. He wanted to get the Blue Dragon cause he was thinking about Chinese New Year. so he thought that he would bring this dragon and celebrate New Years, keeping in mind that he has to sneak out without anyone knowing about it. He goes through all the Lumian's and finds Blue Dragon and quickly tries to get back home before it turns to 12am. At 11:58 he gets back and has to open the Lumian to let the Blue dragon out for everyone. 12am everyone is dancing and sees the Blue dragon flying around. Everyone is cheering and laughing.
I chose this piece of writing because I wanted to change up my topics since I was just explaining my weekends. What I found easy was just coming up the story along the way as I was writing. However the thing I found hard was trying to start it off and just take it from there, and also trying to keep the ideas in sync with each other. My next steps are to use more powerful vocabulary and language because I feel like it was just a little ehhh with just everyday vocabulary.
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