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Friday, 1 June 2018

Publish Writing



Today I made a publish writing of our writing this week. This week we got a free write, if you don't know what that is, it is when the teacher gives you a picture to write about in any type of writing you want. I decided to do a Narrative. We had to talk about, how the bird got stuck in the plastic bag, how did it happen and how does it affect him. This is my slide of the writing. Hope you like it.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Jacqueline,
    I really like your story about how the bird got stuck in the plastic bag - it really shows that you shouldn't be afraid to be different. Maybe next time you could explain why the plastic bag didn't affect the bird's sight. Overall, I think that this is a really good story.
    From Libby

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